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Who are people to judge each other today?
One person is no different then any other
Falling into line of what we are told to do
And not even knowing that we are following
Originality has become a concept of the past
As has every other thing that sets us apart
Human beings all act and look alike nowadays
And even the ones who want to be so different
Are the same as all the others who want that too?

How can people judge each other on their style?
Bags and makeup, shoes and hair, clothes and voice
Is how you judge people saying they are the same
But the alternative is not that much original either
Instead of having Gucci, Burberry, and Enyce designs
Take Good Charlotte, Bright Eyes and Evanescence
There is no difference when it all comes down to it
Just who likes what name better then the other?
It all just depends on what “original” you do want

Look at your clothing, what is so special with it?
Sparkle Pants, ‘Cutie’ shirts, Black pants, band shirts
Why is it thought that a punk is so very different,
Then the cheerleader that wears the pink and red?
Punks and cheerleaders enjoy jumping up and down
And screaming for no apparent reason but excitement
It is just a difference of pink against black really
Baggy shirts baggy pants against tight pants and shirts
Though you dress differently you’re still not different

Open your eyes and witness you are as conformed
Your struggle to be original is just like everyone else’s
People will never understand why this has to happen
Just accept who you are as a difference in personality
With no reason to hate other people for following
When look over how you dress and act sometime
And realize you follow how you are told to be as well
Human kind is naturally following each other in mind
Trying to be accepted by society, forces you to conform
©2004-2010 ~AmaiSuteneko
:iconamaisuteneko:

Author's Comments

There are two things in society today that I hate. Conformity, and Censorship. These are things that have to be in society in order for it to work correctly, but still are not positive things. Now I find that what this poem says is more or less true, mainly for teenage girls...cause that is all I deal with..but still. Tell me what you think? ^.^;;

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:iconclparker:
Not just with teenage girls, this is true where ever you go.

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:iconblazer-san:
True, and well written..
This is actually helping me a bit, since I'm acutally having some problems figuring out who I really am..
Man, that sounded really cliché.. ^_^
Anyway I should thank you, this brings me one step closer to the truth, which I am sure is out there somewhere!
So... Thank you!!!! :hug:

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:iconamaisuteneko:
hehe You're welcome!! :hug: I'm soo happy to help you and happy you liked the poem ::D oes a dance::

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"So if you care to find me Look to the western sky As someone told me lately: 'Ev'ryone deserves the chance to fly' And if I'm flying solo At least I'm flying free To those who'd ground me Take a message back from me Tell them how I Am defying gravity" -
:iconamaisuteneko:
Yeah I know, It's very sad and pathetic

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"So if you care to find me Look to the western sky As someone told me lately: 'Ev'ryone deserves the chance to fly' And if I'm flying solo At least I'm flying free To those who'd ground me Take a message back from me Tell them how I Am defying gravity" -
:iconclparker:
Aye

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:iconkimi-is-so:
i totally agree with that. so i bow to you :bow: anyway excellant work

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Easy Off Bam...and the Swine Flu is gone...
:iconamaisuteneko:
Thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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"So if you care to find me Look to the western sky As someone told me lately: 'Ev'ryone deserves the chance to fly' And if I'm flying solo At least I'm flying free To those who'd ground me Take a message back from me Tell them how I Am defying gravity" -
:iconkimi-is-so:
thats alright :hug:

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Easy Off Bam...and the Swine Flu is gone...
:iconakai-hanabi:
i'm faving.

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