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She lies to herself and everyone else
As she smiles so proudly on the outside
Lying alone with the need to be held
Tears to sleep living deeply in her dreams

Everyone saw the girl
Nobody knew the girl
Did we even care then?
Could we understand?

She saw love always from the outside
Never knew how it truly could be
She looked for it in all the wrong places
Only to be let down again and again

Anyone could have cared
Somebody tried to care
She had just turned away
Never seeing love

How could she know anything of love?
When she won’t even give it a chance
Love is the fickle singular emotion
That sneaks up in deep camouflage

Yet still he still loved her
Even with her back turned
Watching her as she grew
His love continued to live

She lies in his arms deep into the night
Feeling content for all who she has become
Knowing how it feels to be loved now
Seeing all she had missed all she wanted
©2004-2010 ~AmaiSuteneko
:iconamaisuteneko:

Author's Comments

I know it's a crappy title, so sue me. I've been trying to upload this fsker for a while and well. Life hates me every now and then.
Just a basic lyrical poem and shiznit like that. It's crappy as usual I need to work on my skillz for a while, I'm not that proud of this but oh well. Read and tell me what you think Pwease.

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:iconblazer-san:
Very nice!
Um, dunno what to write, really..
But i definetly think you should write more of these! ^_^

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:iconamaisuteneko:
Hehe Thank you my sweetheart :hug: :glomp: I'm happy you liked it, it was really experimental. Maybe I will write another song like thing it's fun to do, that's for sure. We'll See we'll see alright :P

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"So if you care to find me Look to the western sky As someone told me lately: 'Ev'ryone deserves the chance to fly' And if I'm flying solo At least I'm flying free To those who'd ground me Take a message back from me Tell them how I Am defying gravity" -
:icondeadly-sistah:
i really love it make me think about some people i know who dont give love a chance..but nyway very good work=)
:iconamaisuteneko:
Hehe thanks for the fave and the comment. I'm happy you liked it!! Wai :hug:

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"So if you care to find me Look to the western sky As someone told me lately: 'Ev'ryone deserves the chance to fly' And if I'm flying solo At least I'm flying free To those who'd ground me Take a message back from me Tell them how I Am defying gravity" -

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July 6, 2004
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